Ms Mausi's

[msfledermaus]

...I've been doodling a story while I work...but it's just not coming together today.
But at least I can give you something to goof off with, anyway...


Ms Mausi's Bad Poetry Corner...
(with Bongos)

the rain,
the rain, the rain, it
just keeps drizzling
down
like
a
Dairy-queen-sundae
on your shirt,
but not
sticky,and
sweet,
*whacka whacka bip thud*
Not goopy,
soft-serve weather...
*badda badda badda Bang*
and there's
no bananas
not one
in the grayness
coming down from
the sky...

Treacherous
unsweetened
rain...
*thumpa thumpa thumpa whacka thud*


Think you can do better? Prove it. You know ya wanna...

Comments

[goldleafgoddess.livejournal.com]

I can't do better!! That was sooo good, I am ingesting it with the slow caramel fudge sauce of understanding. And sheltered under the umbrella of wishful thinking, I am salivatingly restrained from, and undeservedly anguished by the loss *tappity tappity tap tap THUD* of the cherry on top. *tappity tappity tap WHOMP!*

[buscemi.livejournal.com]

I dunno, but I think Weebl would like to give it a try:

http://www.weebl.jolt.co.uk/poet.htm