Lunchtime partoum

[msfledermaus]

Yummy sandwich, piping hot,
Grilled Cheese and potato chips,
I think I'll go out for lunch...
This will be a happy treat.

Grilled cheese and potato chips,
Wonder what I want to drink?
This will be a happy treat.
The diner is nice and quiet.

Wonder what I want to drink?
I wish I had brought a book.
This diner is nice and quiet.
Potato chip crumbs in my lap.

I wish I had brought a book.
Yummy sandwich, piping hot,
Potato chip crumbs in my lap.
I think I'll go out for lunch...


Thanks, Banana, for teaching me how partoums work. (It's a mind-bending Malaysian poetry form. Cooooool!

Comments

[joei.livejournal.com]

Thanks for trying to help me out, but I think poetry and I are not compatible in the least.