Lunchtime partoum

[msfledermaus]

Yummy sandwich, piping hot,
Grilled Cheese and potato chips,
I think I'll go out for lunch...
This will be a happy treat.

Grilled cheese and potato chips,
Wonder what I want to drink?
This will be a happy treat.
The diner is nice and quiet.

Wonder what I want to drink?
I wish I had brought a book.
This diner is nice and quiet.
Potato chip crumbs in my lap.

I wish I had brought a book.
Yummy sandwich, piping hot,
Potato chip crumbs in my lap.
I think I'll go out for lunch...


Thanks, Banana, for teaching me how partoums work. (It's a mind-bending Malaysian poetry form. Cooooool!

Comments

Re: Spelling flame

[msfledermaus.livejournal.com]

Oh, DAMN!!! I thought I got it...arrrrgh...

And what's this about pants again, eh?

Pants haiku

[banana.livejournal.com]

Transaclantic'ly
The word "pants" changes meaning
Clothes same body parts

Re: Pants haiku

[msfledermaus.livejournal.com]

I think that's so strange,
But I come from a country
where "Impact"'s now a verb...

*grin*

Good morning, you!!! Wait, wait--afternoon?

Mundane haiku

[banana.livejournal.com]

Yes, it's pm here.
Thinking about going home:
Younger child is ill.

Re: Mundane haiku

[msfledermaus.livejournal.com]

Ohhh..poor little mite!
Going home may well be good.
Hope he gets well soon...

Ms Eff, with chicken soup and sympathy.

Re: Mundane haiku

[banana.livejournal.com]

Ms F, meaning well
Has offered chicken soup for
Vegetarians

;~)

Re: Mundane haiku

[msfledermaus.livejournal.com]

Ohhhhh, DAMN!!! I'm a yutz!!!
Well, ginger beer is soothing too,
and no chicken bits..

*grin*

so sorry, J...*Hangs head in shame*

Hehehe

[banana.livejournal.com]

No problem. 8~)